ACES EDUCATION FUND

Tax-deductible donations needed
for scholarships endowment

Posted 2-16-07
The ACES Education Fund is more than halfway toward meeting its initial goal, the establishment of an endowment sufficient to support the five scholarships it awards each year to students who have demonstrated exceptional ability and a commitment to copy editing.

“Thanks to grants from ACES and generous gifts from some board members, the scholarship funds exceed $73,000,” said Neil Holdway of the Daily Herald of suburban Chicago, who serves as treasurer for both ACES and the Education Fund. “But we need at least $130,000 to assure that the awards will always be there for promising students.”

Learn more about the Education Fund, and download a donation form.
Those calculations are based on an assumption that the fund will consistently earn at least 5 percent on its investments. That return is not assured, of course, so the fund’s leaders hope to exceed the initial goal, both to maintain the existing awards and to add to their size and number.

“We need help,” said William G. Connolly, the fund’s president and a retired senior editor of The New York Times. “In these perilous times for journalism, copy editing has never been more important. It’s essential that people who believe in our mission step up to support it.

“If copy editing is to survive and thrive,” he said, “we must encourage our successors, and the scholarship program is an ideal way to do so. I hope every journalist will pitch in to help the cause.”

The largest scholarship granted thus far, for $2,500, is named for Merv Aubespin, a Louisville Courier-Journal retiree, a former president of the National Association of Black Journalists and, as chairman of the Human Resources Committee of the American Society of Newspaper Editors, the “godfather” of ACES. The other four scholarships are for $1,000 each.

You can learn more about the
scholarships and read about the 2006 winners.

The ACES Education Fund has applied for or is preparing applications for several grants. For example, the New York Times Company Foundation has been asked for a contribution that would be used to produce and distribute material intended to spread awareness of the fund, encourage individual and corporate contributions and increase the number of scholarship applications. The Belo Foundation has been asked for a significant gift for scholarships.

And a major fundraising campaign focused on ACES members and other journalists is just getting under way. It will emphasize that gifts to the Education Fund, unlike those to ACES, are tax-deductible and will be used solely to help promising young people who have demonstrated an interest in copy editing.

The fund has qualified for matching grants from the New York Times Company Foundation, which means that every tax-deductible dollar donated by a Times Company employee or retiree will bring a $1.50 contribution from the foundation. Future donors will be asked to check with their employers to determine whether other matches are available for the fund.

Information on how to make a tax-deductible gift is available
here.

Since 1999, ACES has offered scholarships to promising students who show an aptitude for and an interest in copy editing. The Education Fund was established in 2004 as a 501(c)(3) corporation -- a tax-exempt charity, in other words -- to administer the scholarship program and develop other educational efforts.

The fund’s officers, in addition to Neil Holdway and Bill Connolly, are Carrie Camillo of The Washington Post, vice president; and Kathy Schenck of The Milwaukee Journal Sentinel, secretary.

The other members of the board are Merv Aubespin, George W. “Bill” Cloud of the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, Alexander B. Cruden of the Detroit Free Press, Leslie Guevarra of The San Francisco Chronicle, Richard S. Holden of the Dow Jones Newspaper Fund, Merrill Perlman of The New York Times and Pam Robinson of the Los Angeles Times-Washington Post News Service.


HOLIDAY CHEER

'The 12 Deadlines
of Christmas
'


Posted 12-18-06
By David Sullivan

At the first daily deadline,
the features desk sent me
Absolutely no copy.

At the second daily deadline,
the features desk sent me
Two advice columns
and one filler about TV.

At the third daily deadline,
the business desk sent me
Three graphics errors,
Two duplicate stories,
And a filler on the S&P.

On the fourth daily deadline,
the obit desk sent me
Four birth-year errors,
Three wrong survivors,
Two with no ages,
And a fix on yesterday's B3.

At the fifth daily deadline,
the foreign desk sent me
Five analyses,
Four uncut briefs,
Three French brights,
Two Iraq ledes,
And Blair being bit by a bee.

At the sixth daily deadline,
the national desk sent me
Six Larry Sabato quotes,
Five analyses,
Four D.C. briefs,
Three GOP bashers,
Two wayward buses,
And Bush being bit by a bee.

At the seventh daily deadline,
the suburban desk sent me
Seven chicken dinners,
Six zoning hearings,
Five school board meetings,
Four outstanding students,
Three business openings,
Two business closings,
And a cop delivering a baby.

At the eighth daily deadline,
the city desk sent me
An eight-part mayoral preview,
Seven auto crashes,
Six armed robberies,
Five 30-inch stories,
Four pointless briefs,
Three uplifting heroes,
Two transit traumas,
And the tale of an abandoned baby.

At the ninth daily deadline,
the photo desk sent me
Nine uncaptioned photos,
Eight online slideshows,
Seven athlete mug shots,
Six "MUST RUN LARGE"s,
Five standalone packages,
Four shots of Putin,
Three French leaders,
Two traffic tieups,
And the sun setting behind a tree.

At the 10th daily deadline,
the design desk sent me
Ten too-tight orders,
Nine unneeded decks,
Eight mislabeled photos,
Seven mystery elements,
Six pages too late,
Five bad head ideas,
Four pages with no folios,
Three index errors,
Two skyline typos,
And a head ordered 1-72-3.

At the 11th daily deadline,
the sports desk sent me
Eleven college box scores,
Ten high school profiles,
Nine baseball trade briefs,
Eight NBA wraps,
Seven silly coach quotes,
Six NASCAR previews,
Five high school roundups,
Four 30-inch columns,
Three NFL trades,
Two hockey fights,
And a Terrell Owens quote from TV.

On the 12th day of Christmas,
the copy desk had caught:
Twelve misspelled names,
Eleven math mistakes,
Ten bad phone numbers,
Nine wrong day mentions,
Eight caption problems,
Seven coding miscues,
Six simple typos,
Five sports score errors,
Four libelous words,
Three errors in French,
Two graphics screwups,
And the wrong price-code UPC.

David Sullivan is AME of copy desks at the Philadelphia Inquirer. He can be reached at dsullivan@phillynews.com.

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EDITING LESSONS

Learning new tricks and reviewing old ones


Posted 12-10-06
By Gerri Berendzen

Preparing for the future without leaving behind the best of the past -- it can be a delicate balance for copy editors working in a changing industry.

Editors who gathered in Davenport, Iowa, Nov. 11 for the ACES Midwest chapter workshop got a chance to learn new techniques while reviewing basic skills in two sessions: "Capturing Passive, Uninterested Readers," a look at creating alternative story forms for any size paper, and "Diagramming: Putting Sentences in Their Place."

Chris Courtney, design director of the Chicago Tribune's RedEye, led the discussion about alternative story forms. He said that some people in the industry think that introducing alternative story forms into newspapers is a sign that words are dead -- but that couldn't be further from the truth.

"Seventy-five percent of the stories in the today's newspapers are told just fine in the inverted pyramid format," Courtney said. "But 25 percent need to be told in an alternative form."

As advocates of the readers, copy editors need to realize this -- and get involved early in the process, Courtney said.

Alternative story formats -- such as the "how to" form, charticals, panels and roundtables, and chronologies -- take the effort of everyone in the newsroom. Reporters, copy editors, photographers and designers all need to work together to put together well-crafted content for the readers, he said. Editing -- both for content and grammar and style -- is as important for alternative story forms as for any piece of copy that appears in the paper.

"It's content first, then design," Courtney said.

Courtney said copy editors need to get involved when budgets come out and look for topics that would be enhanced with things like timelines, highlights and lists.
"Don't think you can do this great idea after the writing is done," Courtney said.

Today's readers are demanding that newspapers deliver content in a variety of formats, Courtney said. The only way it will work is if all departments in the newsroom work together. He added that alternative story formats are not just for the big metros. Small staffs sometimes have a better handle on the kind of cooperation that makes alternative story forms work, he said. No copy editor should be afraid to take a chance and suggest that stories be told in a different manner.

But as Courtney said, words aren't dead. And developing basic editing skills, especially skills involving grammar, remains one of the ways that copy editors serve readers.

ACES president Chris Wienandt went back to the past to talk about the lost art of diagramming sentences, and why editors ought to give diagramming a second look.

Any editor of a certain age remembers the days in English class, taking sentences and drawing lines to indicate parts of speech and their importance to the sentence.
Why go back to diagramming? Because understanding diagramming means you understand the parts of speech and where phrases should be placed in a sentence. Being able to diagram a sentence can help you untangle those problematic parts of a story, Wienandt said.

"It's not that you're going to be diagramming every sentence you read, or taking the diagram of a bad sentence to the writer," Wienandt said. But being able to dissect a sentence will help copy editors fix muddled writing.

Some of the younger copy editors present were getting their first look at the art of sentence diagramming, and the topic did elicit at least one groan. Yet, beyond the idea of drawing lines and slashes, the session involved a review of the eight parts of speech and some of the basics of grammar -- and it's never a bad idea to review the basics. Diagramming is one way to learn and understand grammar.

Wienandt suggested that anyone wanting more information on diagramming should check out
http://www.geocities.com/gene_moutoux/diagrams.htm.

Gerri Berendzen is copy desk chief of the Quincy (Ill.) Herald-Whig. She can be reached at gberendzen@whig.com.

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OMAHA REGIONAL WORKSHOP

First mini-conference a big success for ACES



Chrisann Nigrin, left, of the Omaha World-Herald and Nancy Anderson of the University of Nebraska-Lincoln shop for ACES merchandise at the regional workshop Oct. 28 at Creighton University in Omaha.
Posted 11-5-06
Copy-editing pros and novices from six states traveled to Creighton University in Omaha, Neb., to learn more about the craft at the first regional workshop sponsored by the ACES Executive Committee.

The 67 registrants for the Oct. 28 event were from Nebraska, Kansas, Iowa, Missouri, Illinois and Colorado. The group included students and professors from four universities and even a few reporters.

Speakers and panelists in the three general and three breakout sessions covered conflict resolution, math for copy editors, design devices to aid scanners, headline polishing, career planning for students and online editing.

Doug Ward of the University of Kansas led a session on "People Editing." He offered advice with an entertaining speaking style and PowerPoint presentation, then handed out a few case studies that allowed the audience to discuss how they would handle some common conflict-resolution scenarios.

Neil Holdway, of the Daily Herald in suburban Chicago and ACES treasurer, brought the dreaded math lessons in an "ACES Math Sampler," hammering home lessons on figuring percentages and that ever-nagging difference between percentage and percentage point, and reviewed such things as accurately and ethically conveying election poll results and crime rates.

Lisa McLendon showed how newspapers can quickly bring their readers nuggets of information on their front pages aside from the headlines. She showed how her Wichita Eagle in Kansas used fact boxes, bullet headlines and other devices throughout centerpiece packages and elsewhere on the page to serve the quick-scanning reader.

After these general sessions, everyone split into three breakouts.

ACES VP Deirdre Edgar of the Los Angeles Times led "Extreme Makeover: Headline Edition," where the class looked at headlines that could have been merely solid but instead were exceptional. Then the group had the chance to write a few of their own.

Zoe Cabaniss Friloux of the Rocky Mountain News, also an ACES vice president, discussed career planning and job skills with the college students who attended the workshop.

And a panel with Alexandra Hayne of the Omaha World-Herald, Chris Wienandt of the Dallas Morning News (and ACES President), and Holdway led a small group in a discussion of how copy editors are working on their newspapers' Web sites -- a process, everyone learned from each other, that continues to evolve. When to post breaking news, how to write Web-specific headlines, and uploading multiple media types such as slide shows and video all were issues for the panelists and guests alike.

Creighton University's high-tech meeting facilities served the ACES guests well, and editors from the Omaha World-Herald were instrumental in organizing this first regional workshop. The ACES Executive Committee believes the Omaha experience will be a springboard for more regional workshops to come at places nationwide that ACES is only beginning to reach.

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HEALTH AND FITNESS

C'mon, copy editors, get healthy

Posted 10-17-06
By Emily Burch Harris

Getting into shape sounds simple – eat less, move more – but in reality it’s one of the hardest things for adults to do.

Maybe we have so many options that we reach information overload (South- Atkins-Detox … what?) and fry our brains before we make our grocery lists. Or maybe diets really don’t work. Or it’s genetics. Or maybe it’s attitude. Hey, if you’re like me, you get sidelined by the copy desk pumpkin (full of chocolaty goodness).

My goal is to tackle fitness and nutrition tips for deskers. Let’s face it: We sit on our duffs for eight hours a day. If we’re lucky, we take a dinner break. If we’re not, we grab a few slices of pizza and shovel it in while editing the latest Foley story.

I taught aerobics through college. I work out five to six days a week. And I watch what I eat. Think I’m buff? Think again. I’ve been trying to shed the same 30 pounds for five years. So when I say getting fit is tough, I know what I’m talking about.

So what works? Start with setting goals. Whether you want to lose five pounds or 10 percent of your body weight, writing down your goals will help you commit.

Plan your life. If you don’t have a plan, you won’t get anywhere. Take some time and jot down menus, shopping lists and your planned exercise for the week. Fifteen minutes of planning will save you time later.

Schedule your exercise. Like most copy editors, I work nights. I won’t be going to a 6 a.m. fitness class. But once a week I can make it to the 9:45 class. The other days, I walk the dog, I lift weights, and I do crunches. No time for the gym? Take your sneakers to work and walk laps in the hall or around the block. If you like “seeing” results, get a pedometer and aim for 10,000 steps a day.

If you are a gym member, talk to the fitness center staff. Ask for an orientation session or set up one or two sessions with a personal trainer. If you’re comfortable with weights, you may want to ask the trainer to write a routine for you. Generally, the session fee covers this and a run-through of the program. In Greensboro, N.C., that would run me $30 every few months. The body gets used to your routine after about three months, so you’ll have to mix it up to keep seeing results.

Sleep! The experts say you should have eight hours a day. I know I can get by with six, but I do better with seven. Every body is different. Figure out how much sleep you need and then be sure to get it. If you can’t sleep, talk to your doctor. If you don’t want sleeping pills, there are other options.

If you set yourself up to fail, you will. But if you make a plan and follow through, you’ll be on your way to a fitter lifestyle.

Emily Burch Harris is a copy and slot editor in Greensboro, N.C. Reach her at
eburch@news-record.com

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NIEMAN FELLOWSHIP

Washington Post copy editor chosen for prestigious program

Posted 7-6-06
By Zoe Cabaniss Friloux

Gina Acosta never saw her copy editing background as an obstacle to receiving a Nieman Fellowship.

Acosta, 34, a copy editor in the editorial department at the Washington Post, said that even as an undergraduate at Florida A&M University, she was making plans to apply for the program.

Gina Acosta, a Washington Post copy editor, will attend Harvard University as a Nieman Fellow.
I always wanted to apply for the Nieman, Acosta said. The program requires five years of professional experience, but, she said, I wanted to wait a couple of extra years to make my application more desirable.''

There have been few copy editors among Nieman Fellows, who spend an academic year taking courses at Harvard University. But Acosta had confidence in her ability to win acceptance for 2006-07.

It never occurred to me that as a copy editor that I d have less of a shot at a Nieman than a foreign correspondent would, she said. I see copy editors as just as much journalists as foreign correspondents are.

All of that has paid off, and she will be heading to Massachusetts in August for 10 months of coursework and other assignments. Acosta s area of interest during her fellowship will be the fiscal consequences of U.S. immigration policy and the participation of ethnic and religious minorities in public life.

She said those whose advice she sought encouraged her to choose a topic she is passionate about. Immigration is a topic with which she is intimately familiar. Her parents are Cuban immigrants, and she knew immigration would attract more and more attention leading up to the 2008 presidential election.

Acosta expects to have plenty of courses from which to choose, and she plans to take classes in science, at the law school and at the Kennedy School of Government. But that s just the beginning.

It s really just an intellectual feast that you re encouraged to take part in. They want you to get there and go through the course shopping period and be inspired.

I m really trying to keep myself as open as possible, she said.
Looking ahead, she plans to return to the editorial department desk and copy editing editorials, letters to the editor and op-ed pieces in summer 2007.

She d also like her fellowship to inspire more copy editors to apply for such opportunities.

The fellowship is really about gaining more knowledge to make myself a better journalist, which will make my newspaper better as well, Acosta said.

She d also like other copy editors to take heart from her being awarded a Nieman Fellowship and apply as well. It s never too early to start planning.

''You definitely want to start thinking about it way ahead.

Visit
http://www.nieman.harvard.edu/ for more information on that process.

Zoe Cabaniss Friloux edits business stories at the Rocky Mountain News in Denver. She can be reached at zfriloux@copydesk.org.

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2006 ROBINSON PRIZE WINNER

USA Today copy editor a leader and an educator in his newsroom

Posted 7-6-06
By Paula Devlin

When Paul Soucy was in high school, he started writing for his high school newspaper. Thus began a love affair with language that continues to this day.

That love led Soucy, now 36 and a copy editor for USA Today, to a profession where he says he feels lucky because he is allowed to work with and really care about language every day.

Paul Soucy of USA Today is the winner of the inaugural Robinson Prize. He received the award at the ACES conference banquet. You can hear his speech and learn more about the Robinson Prize.
Soucy has been recognized for his work by his peers in the American Copy Editors Society by being chosen the first recipient of the Robinson Prize, an award that focuses on excellence over the entire range of skills and contributions in editing.

What makes this award so special, Soucy says, is precisely because it is an honor bestowed by his peers.

''As copy editors, we don't get a lot of recognition,'' he says. ''When we do, it's the 'headline of the month,' because that's what managing editors think of what we do. Or after working on a tough series, you get a note from the managing editor congratulating everyone, 'and the copy desk wrote sparkling headlines.' We're often not even recognized by the guys in the glass offices because they don't know what we do.''

But the $3,000 Robinson Prize, named for Pam Robinson, news editor of the Los Angeles Times-Washington Post News Service and co-founder of ACES in 1997, is awarded by other copy editors, and that makes all the difference, Soucy says.

"It comes from other people who eat lunch at their desks, who work 5 to 1 so they are coming in to work in the opposite direction from everyone else who is going home, who haven't watched prime time television in the last 15 or 20 years," he says.

Soucy and the other nominees were evaluated on several things, including editing and design, mentoring and training, fostering a sense of teamwork and pride among colleagues, as well as anything else that furthers the role of the copy editing profession.

Furthering that role seems to come naturally to Soucy. His role in the USA newsroom has expanded to include fashioning occasional ''style reminders'' that now go to the entire newsroom, not just the copy desk. In each reminder, Soucy tackles a specific style rule that seems to be tripping up editors and reporters alike, and he writes and illustrates the reminders in a light-hearted manner. He says he stresses points of copy editing and journalism, ''not to tell anyone what to do, but to remind them of style points.'' He says his fellow copy editors appreciate it, and his supervisors agree.

Soucy has taken this idea a bit further: He also does classes, desk training, that he says revolve around ''copy desk bugaboos."

"The only reason I learned any of these rules is because I broke them,'' he says with a sheepish smile, ''and someone took the time to teach me.''

As for headline-writing, Soucy values ''clear'' over ''clever.'' But he says writing headlines is ''the least of the job. It's the gravy, the creative expression. But what I love most is helping a reporter express himself or herself the most clearly. At USA Today, we can work directly with reporters. This gives the reporters the chance to see, hear and know us as real people, instead of 'the desk.'''

Soucy has paid his dues as a reporter, and didn't like it. ''I get enough rejection in my life,'' he laughs. ''I don't want to talk to anyone who doesn't want to talk to me.'' He also has turned down the chance to rise through the ranks in his newsroom. ''I like to think one of my strengths is to recognize the Peter Principle in action,'' he says. ''I know what I'm good at. I know what I enjoy. I'm not interested in managing other people; life is stressful enough!''

In the end, the Robinson Prize judges said their decision was an easy one. ''Paul's entry stood out,'' said J.A. Montalbano of the Albuquerque Tribune, chairman of the judging panel. ''It was well-rounded. He's a leader in his newsroom. He writes smart headlines but doesn't try too hard. And he's an educator, of young people and within his newsroom.''

Soucy says he is flattered and humbled by the prize. ''The fact that this organization is now recognizing the work of other copy editors makes me so proud to be a member of this organization,'' he says.

Paula Devlin is copy desk chief at The Times-Picayune. Contact her at pdevlin@timespicayune.com. This story was reprinted from the May-June 2006 ACES newsletter.

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