by Jim Thomsen » 7:28 pm, Sunday, December 16, 2007
Good advice I was given some 20 years ago: Treat your resume as if it's a story you've written. Writers, of course, are not the best editors of their own work; that's why we have jobs as copy editors. So, once you've taken your own best whack at winnowing down your resume, hand it over to a trusted colleague whom you trust to be brutal with you — for your own benefit.
Some typical examples of "resume bloat" I've seen over the years:
— Listing of individual awards. At some point, third place in a state association's contest for headline writing in, say, 2000, loses its value. If you've got a lot of awards, find some way to summarize them. (Example: "Since 2000, I've won 14 Oregon Press Association awards for headline writing and page design" ... something like that.)
— Listing ever single duty performed in a job. Here, it's helpful to anticipate what a hiring manager likely wants to hear — whether or not you've got experience in design, or Web posting, or slotting. If so, say so in as few words as possible. The best way to beat resume bloat is to remember that you should save something for a follow-up conversation or an interview.
— Listing of objective(s). The objective is usually self-evident: You want a job.
— Listing every single journalism job you've had. In my case, I've had several, going back to the mid-1980s. What I do is list the four most recent jobs, then add a line saying: "Also worked for the Backwater Bugle, Redneck Gap, Saskatchewan (reporter and assistant editor, 1994-96); the Cheese Point Courier, Cheese Point, Wisc. (reporter, 1993-94)" and so on. At some point, older jobs lose all relevance apart from the fact that they add to your years of journalism experience.
Anybody else know of examples of resume bloat?
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