| By John McIntyre
Not since The Elements of Style have I come across a book of such compact good advice about English usage. Ken Smith’s Junk English is written with a magnificent scorn for the shoddy, the meretricious and the dishonest. Look, for example, at what he says about the vogue for generate: "When compared to ordinary words like produce and create, generate sounds impressive. Electricity and power are things that are generated. It is not surprising that a journalist seeking to enliven an article would borrow the word to say that a new film generated excitement or that an appeals court ruling generated controversy. Memo writers, seeing generate in this expanded role and unwisely trusting in the lexical accuracy of the press, have begun to use it as well. Generate now describes the creation of reports and the production of trash, or anything else for which produce and create are no longer thought sufficiently thrilling." Or his list of reprehensible business euphemisms: accept this special invitation for pay money, convenience fee for interest charge, special criteria for restrictions, and more. "Stuffing" is his category for words or
phrases that are made to carry "multiple (and
Smith finds the business world addicted to battlefield language, writers of all kinds falling into jargon and cliché, and perfectly good words eroded through precise use. And these lapses amount to more than mere words; they represent serious moral and social phenomena: "Junk English is much more than sloppy grammar. It is a hash of human frailties and cultural license: spurning the language of the educated yet spawning its on pretentious words and phrases, favoring appearance over substance, broadness over precision, and loudness above all. It is sometimes innocent, sometimes lazy, sometimes wll intended, but most often it is a trick we play upon ourselves to make the unremarkable seem important." Junk English reminds the reader not only of precision in language, but also of our need for integrity. If you care about either, you will want to have it. John E. McIntyre is assistant managing editor for the copy desk at the Baltimore Sun, and president of ACES. |
| Posted June 6, 2002 |
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